flowerwalk » 01 май 2014, 01:14
Уважаемые сообщники, в особенности Moon River, оцените, пожалуйста, непредвзято моё мотивационное письмо для учебной визы. Еду учить английский на 4 недели, но никаких сертификатов об изучении языка у меня нет.
Motivation letter
Dear visa officer,
I’m applying for a student visitor visa as I’d like to study English in London for 4 weeks in June. I’m an individual entrepreneur working as a travel agent. And as the sphere of my work grows and slightly changes, I realized that now I frequently use English for work when I communicate with some of my partners, hotels and airlines. But another thing I understood is the fact that I have difficulties in speech and, what is more important, comprehension. I think it’s time to improve my English to be more effective and to have less stress during phone calls. Also sometimes I make translations for my clients. I don’t have big problems with them, but I know that they can be more professional.
I didn’t study English seriously since University, that’s why I don’t have any certificates (but the copy of my diploma is attached to show that I had an exam on English there). I visited communication classes several times, but they were unsatisfactory for me, because there were many people, and I couldn’t take the chance to talk, but had to listen to other people and their mistakes. I took several private classes, but they were very unsystematical, mostly because of my work. I have irregular working hours which depend on my clients, so it is very difficult to plan something for a special time and special day every week. So I realized that if I want to improve my English, I should do it with a full immersion when nothing distracts me. I decided to dedicate my holiday to this, and the best place for studying English, to my mind, is the UK as the country of the origin of the language. I’ve chosen London, because in this big city it is possible to communicate with many different people with different accents all the time, not only during study hours. Victoria School of English attracted me, because it is a little family-owned school with small classes, native speakers as teachers, reasonable prices and interesting location in Central London. I’ve chosen a homestay accommodation to see and feel how people in the UK live and also to have more opportunities to talk.
In my application I’ve mentioned that I don’t know the exact address where my homestay accommodation is booked. I really didn’t at the time of filling the application form. But when I’ve got all the confirmations from my school I’ve seen what accommodation they’ve chosen for me. The address is 23 Oakbury Road, Fulham, London, SW6 2NN, the host is Mrs Julie Daou.
Please, don’t hesitate to contact me if you have any questions.
In hope of your favorable decision,
Заранее спасибо за ваши ответы!
